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jamriot
this was nice and i thought this twist was funny! i had a few thoughts about the worldbuilding and characterization being somewhat bland in the first half, but that might be intentional as part of the warped world kade sees. if it wasn’t intentional, then i’d make sure to consider the motivations behind character’s actions and words more. either way, nice work and thank you so much for participating! i hope to see you participate in the future!
scratcher11
thx for the feedback! i'll be honest tho, it was more intentional for the wrong reason, aka my paranoia of making the twist predictable lol ;D